Please ignore the previous post, which'll forever be an annoying eyesore on my blog. Closing your quotations is important, boys and girls. That's what the last half hour of pain has taught me, at least.
Anyways, trying again....
So I've long desired to write for this online comics mag, and since they actually require that you write submissions before you submit them, I tried my hand at a short essay tonight. If anyone has a chance, I'd greatly appreciate a few extra sets of eyes before sending it. Machete away - my hide's gotten too soft these days.
Let me be firm on the point that this is not a big deal, and there's no need to break your back over this. But any thoughts would be appreciated, with thanks in advance.
And now - reading comics! Or possibly cable. Or writing fun Dad stuff. My, but my life is exciting. *g*